People are still treating me badly because what happened at the party.Girls are pushing me hitting me and more they are just being real rude but none of them really understands my situation. I am afraid to tell my parents what happened because i think they will be ashamed of me or disappointed and I am afraid of what they will think. Heather is meeting with a new crew they are called the martha's but I don't think they like me so I don't try to join in plus they are on the expensive side so I don't think I could afford to be in their crew anyway. my parents make me stay after school everyday so I agreed and now I just go to my secret closet in the school and start to clean it out so I can make it more home welcoming for myself when I go there when I want to be alone.
Well done! You have done a nice job taking on Melinda's voice. Make sure you avoid run-on sentences though! Also, remember to use capital I's!
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